Reflection Post 1 (5)

            They are still several different parts of writing I need to work on as I move on in high school. I discovered each one as I was graded in each one of my writings and the opinions of others. Each one is significant as it can be very impactful for both my grades and my overall writing. By fixing these small things, I could affect my writing dramatically.

              I need to mainly focus on my choice of words and transition sentences. This is very important as it can determine how my writings flow and if they go off topic. Without the choice of the vivid verbs and strong adjectives, my writings will be dull and very hard to understand. This skill needs to be developed as I write more. It needs to be researched to understand how to fix it.